Book Review for

 

MURPHY’S TROUBLES

By

Rex Owens

 

Propelled by insatiable grief, patriotism, and youthful naivety into a decades-long double life, a popular Irish author’s secret ties to the Irish Republican Army finally implode in Murphy’s Troubles, Rex Owen’s soulful political thriller.

A Catholic from far southern Ireland, Ian Murphy joins the IRA after the violent death of his childhood friend, an IRA volunteer fighting to liberate Northern Ireland from British rule.

But after thirty years of living as both a best-selling novelist and the secret author of an infamous IRA training manual and other published IRA propaganda, Ian’s dual existence is upended by family tragedy and a lover’s betrayal.

Some of the story’s most wrenching scenes come as Ian’s lover, a married, aggressively professional, award-winning newspaper journalist, stumbles upon his secret and must weigh whether to share it with the world. The couple’s subsequent confrontation, in a dank pub cellar, is rawly emotive. 

Emotions run deep, in fact, throughout the story, as Ian deals with other deaths, the accidental maiming of his young niece in an IRA bombing, the demise of his affair and bitter recognition of the role he has played in the IRA-related deaths of thousands of people. His tortured existence is further complicated by an increasing propensity to drown his sorrows in alcohol.

Ian’s struggles, however, lead him to chart a new course, working for peace rather than violent confrontation. Love – and love lost – can cloud our minds but can also clarify, is the message.

The story charts the characters’ motivations for setting their lives on a particular course, the hard choices they must make to stay on that path or divert from it, the courage required to do either, and the repercussions of it all.

Owens does his homework, offering a credibly researched, albeit fictionalized, primer on the IRA and its place in Irish history. Historical context is woven into the novel in a clear, concise way that will appeal to readers in and outside of Ireland, including those only marginally familiar with the country’s politics and past.

The novel could have been improved by clarifying one key point in the plot’s chronology, a scene early on in which Ian, in despair after his niece is injured, crashes his car into a British barricade. Owens places enough importance on this explosive crash to lead the novel with it. But did it occur before or after his lover’s betrayal? That’s never clearly stated, even in careful retracing of the text. Recapping this scene by coming fully back to it, rather than leaving its place in the overall course of events to the reader’s imagination, would have brought the story full circle and might have lent important context to Ian’s mindset.

This omission isn’t fatal, however, to this otherwise excellently researched and well-penned, deeply human story about life-changing decisions, reverberations and the potential for renewal.

-Inkspots Reviews

I’ve always been a person that need a carrot out in front me, like a reluctant horse, to get me to move along.  My wife likes to say I’m goal oriented.  That’s kind but the truth is that without something to grasp for I fall into lethargy.

Earlier this year I gave myself the goal of finishing the first draft of my second novel.  I knew, in general, what I wanted to write but I was plagued by the lack of a writing routine and a concrete idea of what meant in daily work.

I decided that “second novel” was too vague.  I felt comfortable with writing about 80,000 words in MURPHY’S TROUBLES, so I made that my goal for the second novel.  Next, I needed a specific target to aid it, 2014 for completion was too vague too.

For no particular reason, I decided I wanted to finish the very ROUGH draft by November 30th.  My previously shapeless goal was not taking on a real form.  For years I have used a seven day week as my work unit.  I learned a method based on a Stephen Covey book to set a goal that needed to be completed in a week, and then figure out what needed to be done to meet that goal.  The last step was to create blocks of time to work on the tasks that would result in a completed goal.

To write 80,000 words by November 30th would mean slugging out about 1700 words a week. Unfortunately, I had false starts the in January and February and part of March, meaning I now had only 38 weeks to write my 80,000 word novel.  I need to write about 2100 words a week to make my goal.  Now that’s something you can bite your teeth into.

I purchased a big white board calendar and put my week goal in large numbers at the top.   Each day I write on the board how many words I’ve written.  To date, I’ve cranked out over 18,000 words a week, about double my goal!

Shizam!  It’s working.  I’m now confident that I’ll make my goal, I can relax. My creativity and imagination are in high gear and I’m enjoying the writing without stress.  That’s the POWER of a goal.

           

One good reason to attend local writer’s conferences and writer’s programs is to build community.  Through the Madison Writers’ Institute I met Valerie Biel.  We write in completely different genres, Valerie writes for teens and tweens, I write adult fiction.  We have in common a keen interest in Celtic culture and we have both traveled to Ireland with our families.  Valerie was one person I sent both my book cover and my back of book blurb to when I was developing them for publication.  Of more than ten people I sent materials to, Valerie to the time to make significant suggestions for improvement to my back of book blurb.  Her suggestions went “click” with me and I incorporated them into what is now my back of book blurb.

Last week Valerie went live with her website:  www.valeriebiel.com.  She has worked with her website designer for over a year and had very specific elements she insisted be included in the site.  For example, there is a butterfly at the top of the site that mimics flight.  There is also a centipede to click into for fun facts and activities about the Amazon.  Her photographs are lush and give a glimpse of both Ireland and the Amazon.

Valerie’s first young adult novel, CIRCLE OF NINE – BELTANY is due for launch this summer.  The page on her website provides a stunning synopsis and she shares her inspiration for the story.  It’s clear from her inspiration that Valerie thinks like an author.

I admit, by comparison, my website, is static and not as visually appealing.  Mine also doesn’t include all the social media links that Valerie has incorporated.  Mine is a DIY site, while Valerie’s is professionally designed by MediaNet.  Please visit www.valeriebiel.com and treat yourself to a profound experience.  

I am working on my second novel and having a bad time of it.  Writing my second novel some days I feel like Sisyphus.  My first novel took fourteen years to write and I worked on in in bits and pieces with UW-Madison Writer's Institute classes; UW-Madison's Weekend with your novel; , UW-Madison's critique groups; and, UW-Madison's Writers by the Lake.  I did it this way because I was still in the work-a-day world and used these special classes to devote myself to writing in short, intense bursts of learning, energy and creativity.  In those days I thought being free from the stardard job would be a panacea for my writing life.

My career ended abruptly one Friday morning when I learned that my managers' salary was dragging the company I worked for into the financial abyss, twelve others got the same news that day.  I am fortunate to have a pension so financial security was ensured and I saw this change as my chance to finally finish my first novel.

Murphy's Troubles was published in November 2013, it had taken four years.  I've finally settled on what to write for my second novel, only because the protagonist, Ian Murphy scolded me in a dream and said he wasn't finished telling his story.  My working title for the second novel is:  There Was Sadness, There was Joy.  As I began to write I discovered I don't have a writing routine.

I have complete control of my time and yet I struggle to develop any sort of writing routine.  The entire book is in my head, of that I am certain.  I found myself obsessing with chapter one, which has been written and re-written at least 25 times.  There is some part of me that has to have the first chapter exactly right before I can move on.  So, I'm accepting that as part of my writing routine.  I've also been indecisive about point of view, that demon that haunts me whenever I splash a work across the screen of my lap top.

Just this week I've settled on first person point of view.  While some consider it limiting, it allows a more personal, in depth story.  I want to see the world only through Ian Murphy's eyes because that's the only way I can convey it on the page - the way Ian wants the story told.

I will be working on having a writing routine for a long time to come.  Who knows, maybe my routine is not have a routine.  I know there's a lot of advice to just sit down at the keyboard every day, same time, and do my thing.  That approach seems to be common among writers.  For me, it doesn't feel right; maybe I'm fighting the self-discipline it takes.

So, a lot of days I feel like Sisyphus, pushing the boulder up the mountain only to watch the boulder roll down and do it again tomorrow.    

Last week I shared with you my experience with a local independent bookstore that charges a $15.00 fee for consignment sales.  The other independent bookstore in Madison is Mystery to Me owned by Joanne Berg and is tucked into the Monroe Street neighborhood at 1863 Monroe Street. Joanne had a career at the University of Wisconsin and retired recently and opened a bookstore, her lifelong dream.  The previous store, Booked for Murder, was closing so Joanne bought it and moved it to the Monroe Street location.  As the name implies, the store specializes in mystery books.  In the eight months Joanne has owned and managed the store she has expanded the selection to include general fiction, children's books and local authors.

The bookshelf for local authors is in front of the store between the entrance and the checkout counter.  You can't miss it.  She also puts a bright orange sticker on the books, LOCAL AUTHOR.

I called her and she invited me to come in the same day, bring some books and discuss a potential author event.  I took five books.  Joanne had a form to fill out and the split was 60% for the author and 40% for the bookstore - NO FEE.  In addition, she will have my book reviewed and the review will be published in a bookstore newsletter and my book will be advertised on their webpage.  When the five books are sold, I get a check and we discuss how many more books she would like to have. Easy.

To support local authors Joanne has developed what she calls an Author Slam.  It's a three day event where authors get 15 minutes to pitch their book to the public.  The books can be any genre.  This year the slam will be February 20, 21 and 22.  Joanne has signed up 31 authors to make a presentation.  No other bookstore in southern Wisconsin sponsors an event like this.

The Author Slam is good for first timers because anyone should be able to survive 15 minutes on their feet in front of an audience.  It's good for the bookstore because it attracts traffic through the store for three consecutive days and those folks are readers. Most avid readers are not able to purchase only one book when they visit a bookstore so there are more sales which in turn supports future Author Slams.

My experience with Joanne Berg has restored my faith in independent bookstores and the collaboration between independent bookstores and independent authors/publishers.   

I must share my experience with one Madison independent bookstore.  I will strive to share my experience without judgment, although it is difficult.  I would prefer each of you to form your jown conclusion.

I e-mailed the event director of the bookstore three times asking what the process was to schedule a local author reading/signing event.  In the third e-mail I allowed my frustration to show and specifically asked for the courtesy of a response and documented my two previous e-mails.

After the third e-mail I received an apologetic response that didn't address how to schedule an author event but did make an offer to take three of my books on consignment and a form was attached for me to complete and bring in when I delivered the books.

I was disappointed that they only wanted three books, but it was a start.  I printed the form and learned there was a $15.00 fee for selling my books plus the bookstore would take 40% of the sale price.  I admit, I was angry with the request for a $15.00 fee.  I had spent the week researching marketing opportunities and everything cost money.  For example, a two week blog tour cost $175; joining the Author Marketing Club cost $125; placing an ad in Goodreads was $100; a marketing company wanted $690 to evaluate my marketing plan and do 10 blogs.  The $15.00 fee was more than I could tolerate.

To calm myself I completed a financial analysis of the consignment.  When I include the book cost and shipping for each book then add the $15.00 fee it would cost me about $6.00 to have the bookstore sell three books.  The bookstore would make the $15.00 fee plus 40% of the sale price. The bookstore would get about $33.00 for selling my book.  Do you think there's anything wrong with this picture?

I e-mailed the bookstore event director and shared my financial analysis and asked if their practice of charging an independent author $15.00 to sell books was fair.  I told them I simply couldn't afford to have them sell my books unless they relinquished the $15.00 fee.

The response I received was that they too had completed a financial analysis and claimed that it cost them $15.00 to sell my book.  That argument seemed inaccurate to me because I'm sure they dont charge traditional publishers to sell books - no publisher would pay a fee.  In addition, the bookstore has to buy the book from a traditional publisher.  In a consignment sale the bookstore doesn't purchase the book.  The director of events claimed that most independent authors covered their fee by raising the price of their books.  My book has the price, with a barcode, on the back cover.  I can't and wouldn't change the price of my book, it isn't ethical.

I didn't respond to their final e-mail.  There is no point.  For the record, the bookstore is A Room of One's Own.  Next week I'll share my experience with the other independent bookstore in Madison.

What do you think of a bookstore charging an independent author/publisher to sell books? 

In researching elements of a marketing campaign for independent authors/publishers it was stressed that book reviews are essential.  In the traditional publishing world publishers send out either advance copies or copies soon after publication and tend to work with specific reviewers.  It is highly recommended that we self-publishers also send out advance copies and use the reviews received both as part of the back of the book blub and for initial marketing.

I didn’t send out advance copies of my book to reviewers.  I was caught up in the details of book production and was determined to hit the holiday market; there just wasn’t time for everything.  I met the goal of having MURPHY’S TROUBLES available for holiday book purchases (November 18th available on Amazon).  I did garner a satisfying number of readers locally and squeezed in two book signing events in December.

The truth is I have not attracted attention to MURPHY’S TROUBLES on Amazon.  I would like to have readers review my book.  I have had one local author offer to write a review, unfortunately, the offer came in mid-December through my website e-mail (which I rarely check) and it was a month before I responded to his offer.  I’ve responded to him but I’m not sure if he’s still interested.

What am I asking for?  I would like a one paragraph review of about 50-75 words, and approval to publish the review online and other appropriate places. If you are interested in reviewing MURPHY’S TROUBLES, please contact me at:  [email protected].  Of course I will provide a copy of the book.   

As a first time published author there are a lot of thrills.  Now it’s been about eight weeks since MURPHY’S TROUBLES became available on Amazon.  While some authors disparage book readings and signings I found them exciting and having feedback from readers is fascinating and educational.

In the last few weeks I’ve received several responses from readers, all people I know, that have been special little gifts.  One friend let me know she’s read through chapter seven this week and she e-mailed that I had “captured” her.  Another is an AARP advocate colleague.  He e-mailed me that he purchased my book on Amazon and was enjoying a good read during a frigid Wisconsin winter.  I never expected a person I’ve worked with in AARP to also become a reader.  Finally, one of the staff at Beans n Cream Coffeehouse told me she bought my book for her Dad for Christmas.  She wanted to let me know her Dad started reading on Christmas day, has finished the book and is passing it along to other family members.

Finally, I received an e-mail from my college roommate (yes, we still stay in touch).  He let me know he also bought my book on Amazon and would be giving me feedback soon.  He lives in Maine and with the extreme winter blizzards, if he has light and heat, he’ll have time to read.

Originally, I was terrified of what people who read the book might say to me.  I have been surprised at how kind and generous people have been. 

What experiences have you had when readers respond to your work? 

I have subscribed to The Writer Magazine since 2001 and it has been published since 1887.  I’ve been fortunate to have two articles published in The Writer (May 2012 and September 2012).  The February 2014 issue has a story by Neil Evans, “For a living”.  One sentence in the article grabbed by attention:  “Writing is an act; being a writer is a state of mind, a lifestyle, a necessity.”  By his definition Evans claims he isn’t a writer but he does earn his income from writing, working as a web content editor.

In an age of e-mails, e-zines, blogs, tweets, and content writing we have stretched what has been traditionally meant to be a writer.  I enjoy writing a weekly blog and a monthly feature in the e-zine Extra Innings; however, my first love is the novel.   In reflecting on the direction I want to take in 2014 Evans’ definition of a writer is critical.

For years I dreamt of being a writer.  At first I thought that if I was paid for my writing, I would be a writer.  I achieved that goal in 2010 but still didn’t view myself as a writer.  Then I decided I would be a writer when I published my first novel.  I achieved that goal in November 2013.  Yet, something was missing; I continued to struggle with the notion that I am a writer.

The missing element is in Evans definition:  “. . . being a writer is a state of mind, a lifestyle, a necessity.” In 2014 I plan to give myself the freedom to explore being a writer with this definition in mind.  Recently, I helped a friend polish his musical comedy, tightening the story, giving color to characters and tying up loose ends in the last act.  His focus was the music, not the story.  He asked me one day how I came up with the changes I suggested.  My response, without thinking was:  “That’s what I do.”    

There is some debate on the meaning of the expression; “cast the die”, some say the origin is Julius Caesar.  I prefer the version deeply rooted in metallurgy when molten metal was poured into a mold or die that would form an object once the metal cooled.  In 2014 I’m casting the die to have the freedom to live a writer’s state of mind, a lifestyle and accept the necessity of writing in my life.   

It’s winter in Wisconsin.  It snows in the winter in Wisconsin.  For my first book signing this past Saturday at the Beans n Cream Coffeehouse, it snowed.  The snow began several hours before my 10 a.m. start time.  It was the type of snow that melts when it hits the road pavement and turns into a mush.  The mush makes driving tenuous.  My hopes for hoards of book purchasers with books in hand to sign melted like the new snow striking pavement.

The table at the coffee shop had a sign reading “Reserved for Rex Owens book signing”.  A stack of books sat on the table.  I added my book cover poster to attract potential book readers and took a seat.  My wife was armed with the camera to record the historic moments.  The first person through the door was my best friend, he picked up a book from my table, purchased it and his four shot cappuccino then joined me at the table.  Everyone that stopped by the table followed his lead that morning.  I was in author’s heaven.  On a Saturday morning I was hanging out at the coffee shop, drinking coffee, selling books, signing books and talking with my friends for two and a half hours.  What could be better?  I sold about 10 books and it was very satisfying.

It’s still winter in Wisconsin.  My “big” event was the book reading and signing at the Sun Prairie Public Library this past Monday evening.  The snow began about 3:00 p.m.   It snowed hard.  It was the kind of snow that when you turn on your ‘brights’ when driving you get a wall of white and realize it’s worse so you turn them off.  About 5:30 p.m. my phone began ringing, friends calling to tell me the snow was too much of a hazard and they wouldn’t be attending the reading.  I didn’t answer those calls; I let them go to voicemail.  I appreciated the calls but didn’t want to hear them.

By 6:20 p.m. only one person arrived for the reading.  I was determined not to cancel.  Then two more arrived.  At 6:30 the library staff insisted that I begin even with only three people in the room.  I started.  During my opening remarks people straggled into the room, one by one, until we had ten in all.  I wanted to have an informal conversation with readers, not just lecture and read.  We struck up a conversation, people contributed their experiences traveling in Ireland and after the reading we continued to talk.  My wife Lynette sold books at a table in the back of the room and we sold another 10 books.  I was elated.

For an author talking directly with readers is a very special experience.  We all write to be read.  Talking with readers completes the writing experience and provides another way for writers to enrich their writing.  I thoroughly enjoy the reading and signing events.  The events connect me with my community and make me whole as a writer.  I’m looking forward to a year of author events in 2014.

Next week is family week with son, daughter-in-law and one year old granddaughter visiting from Omaha.  The whole clan will be together for the first time in several years.  I’m going take a break for posting a blog and enjoy the warmth of my family.  For 2014 I offer a traditional Irish blessing:

May you have the hindsight to know where you’ve been, the foresight to know where you’re going and the insight to know when you’re going too far.